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Name: _______________________________________________________________________

Write a letter of appreciation to someone who has been supportive of you in some way (example: friend">

Return to LA 10

Name: _______________________________________________________________________

Write a letter of appreciation to someone who has been supportive of you in some way (example: friend, relative, parent, etc.).

  1. Compile a list of three people who you appreciate for being supportive of you in some way. Choose one and explain how and why (100 words)
  2. Outline
    big idea (who you appreciate and why), 2 main ideas (two reasons), general details for each main idea (one sentence summary of what you will talk about - this may change as you write your drafts)
  3. Write your rough draft - 250 word minimum.
  4. Add an engaging opening (Introduction Paragraph)
  5. intriguing question

    startling statement

    facts or statistics

    background information

    experience or example

    thesis statement

  6. Students will conference and revise.
    -use 3 of 5 senses with two similes
    -2 experiences
    -cut 50 words (no more than 20 words in one spot will count)
    -add 100 words
    -rephrase one sentence
    -add a conclusion that mirrors the engaging introduction.
  7. Final draft of letter (plus all previous drafts) is due Monday.*
    Final draft must be a minimum of 300 words.

* = Any draft that is emailed to Mr. McCarthy and used as a class example will earn the author 3 extra-credit points.

Grading Ruberic

Process = 20 pts.
Earned if all required steps are accomplished.

Product = 40 pts.

10 pts. for Maintaining Big Idea
15 pts. paper structure - Engaging introduction, Body paragraphs, conclusion
15 pts. layered details.